Spitzer Hafen

SPITZER HAFEN

About The Book:
   If you destroy America's values and wait awhile, America might well destroy itself. One of America's most sophisticated enemies is counting on that. He's quietly backing a silver-tongued apostate's plan to subvert Christianity.

So far the main threats to the apostate's plan are two former missionaries broadcasting from a tiny island. As their truth begins to prevail against the apostate's lies, world-class assassins are sent to eliminate the missionaries.

   However, the missionaries now have a friend with them. Decades ago he was so deadly, and so stealthy, that the KGB refused to believe he could even exist. He was also the last of the Vectors.

My Opinion:
   I have to honestly say that this book was one of the most difficult to continue reading. The bad grammer, spelling and inconsistency aside, the story itself was so convoluted that I found myself having to backtrack to reread several pages at a time so I could be sure where the storyline had come from and where it was going.

   The storyline itself had potential but I don't feel that the author was particularly knowledgable about much of what was written. It was more like 4 separate stories brought together in an attempt to formulate a single outcome. Unfortunately too much gets lost in the insignificant details. It sidetracks so much that I easily got lost, thus requiring me to reread certain things to be sure I was unerstanding exactly what it was trying to say.

   The names kept getting mixed up as well as so many spelling errors. Being an English/Grammar enthusiast, these random mistakes were very distracting. The radio station, WHGT, often had the call letters mixed up. Sometimes it was WHGT and sometimes WGHT. Also a woman who was known as The Valkyrie, was given an aka of Velma Smith. At least twice the author called her "aka Valerie Smith".
 
   The grammar was lacking in consistency as well. Too many characters, from too many foreign places, made it difficult to know who was who and where each of them was from. Giving "accents" by choosing certain verbage for different characters made it difficult to figure out who was from where. Names tended to be repeated too often and much of the scene building was lost in the over explanation of situations.

   All in all, I have to say that the reading experience was unpleasant and drawn out. The storyline itself had such good potential and I would hope that the author will eventually rewrite it with less business and focus on the actual plot.




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